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Transition Train Oh Lord! I've been a hungry man for everything that's sin, I've left many broken fences just every place I've been. I know I must have children quite possibly three or four, there...

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Heaps of kudos on this one Dinah!!!

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I just love this aanneee! It has so much in it. I find it amusing, poignant, sad and the last little section is a surprising end to this unusual poem.

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Thank you both for reading me... The train of transition was a phrase going through my head I couldn't seem to dump, so I wrote this to make room in my brain for something else. Dinah

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Dinah, How sad to die alone and unnoticed. You create empathy with your evocative poem. The title is perfect I think! I am so happy that you are here at the Pub. I hope you will enjoy this poetic home...

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I actually posted this on my time, just before 10 p.m on the 14th although it states the 15th I see now...a three hour time difference I suppose. I did inadvertently post 4 on the 15th, my time zone...

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God might forgive him but i wonder if those children or the women he deserted will?

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Great write Dinah! I think this may happen more times than we will ever know. Dee

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Thanks Willow, as this is simply a product of my imagination I expect all is forgiven because I as the story teller do not personally believe in holding grudges at all. Dinah

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Thank you Dee, I appreciate you reading and commenting Dinah

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Hi Dinah, This is an amazing poem, poignant and lonely. It makes one immediately think of the current rash of homeless people who have lost homes. Your caught the spirit of the lost who live the best...

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